Wednesday, July 13, 2011

Need some Writing help!

Know it's been forever since I've wrote on here, or any of my blogs for that matter, but I've been super busy with starting upgrades for my Math and looking for a job. Also been working on finishing my Creative Writing course. I started working on The Never-Ending Dance that I want to expand to submit to Realms of Fantasy magazine and am having a lot of trouble. I've got it expanded to roughly 800 words now...It needs to be around 5000 to really be submission worthy....and I just can't get it expanded to that without possibly ruining it...I really need some advice on it.


  1. When I get stuck with too short of a story I ask my Piano Man to read it and invariably he finds a hole or two where I can add more. Have you read it aloud to yourself a few times, then sentence by sentence and made sure that you've answer all the questions?

  2. I emailed, but I guess your old email is not working. Can you send me your new email address please? I forward the message I sent you a few days ago.